acez
Medicine Cat
GustClan Medicine Cat
i'd like to blame global warming
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Post by acez on May 4, 2011 16:21:40 GMT -5
Name: Crash and Burn are what they are called today, but tommorow they could be something entirely different. The two cats live on constantly changing their names so that to one cat they are Shock and Wave, yet to another, they could be Castor and Pollux. They keep finding and testing names until they find that suits 'em just right.
Age: don't you know it's rude to ask someone their age? the toms look 36 moons, yet they act like children.. so who could know?
Gender: both are male
Rank: loners, rogues, call it what you will.
Clan: the two have heard of these wildcat clans, and the idea intrigues them so. However, they have yet to join a clan, and it is doubtful they ever will.
Personality: With the evil, they are wicked. For the good, they are saints. The play personalities like they do their name, whatever fits their fancies. They are what you call a neutral party, the play for all and no clan, any and every cat.
Despite the fact, they play with their personalities and emotions, they are always out-going and flirtatious, egos big enough to smother anyone who's near. With vanity playing to their every whim, and handsome without scars to the psychical body, they try to make it known that they are the world's greatest creations.
Perhaps you haven't noticed, but from the way they talk, to the way they walk, they are twins, and true to twin nature, they have a tendency to copy the other's movement. But they have mastered the art of confusion, split image of the other, mirror images. If one slouches, the other automatically does so as well. It's hard to tell who started the movement and who followed.
They think, they feel the same way. They know what the other likes, dislikes. They speak with the same drawl, the rolls of the 'r' and the lilt of the 's.' However, they are grown toms, so they can trust one another to be alone, which brings out one another's separate likes and dislikes. Burn, the youngest by mere seconds likes flowers and silence, where as Crash likes loud noises and can be found with his head on the thunderpath road, just liking the hum of the monsters in his ears and the way his body vibrates with adrenaline. But you could hardly tell when the two are together. Together, the two are teasing, flirtatious toms with an outgoing nature and rather addictive charisma that attracts many cats to them like flies to honey.
They are social butterflies, fluttering to the people who fancy them, and boy, they love to tease. No insult can sway them, no banter can beat them down. Their ego pushes them upward and with their heads in the clouds, it'll take something quite catastrophic to put their feet on the floor.
They aren't exactly the best people to be friends with, as they would easily sell out any secrets you tell them to another, as they enjoy playing with people, like a god plays with his pawns. Because of their freelance positions, free from the clans and alley cats, the two will drift from one clan territory to the other. They don't hunt in the clan territory, as much as it is tempting, the two merely socialize with the cats of the clans. They thirst for knowledge and are eager to share what knowledge they have. The two have a lenient view of thinking, which allows them to look at one thing and then another and accept either belief or thought, which makes them fence-sitters when it comes to arguments between cats or clans. coffbromancecoff
Physical Description: The two are identical in looks, with long slim bodies that curl and twist with amazing flexibility. With the two brothers, they have short, wiry red coats, with a dark blazing color that could remind cats of the falling autumn leaves for that is what their pelts look like. With constant layerings of dark orange and brown, in the right light, they look as though they are on fire.
With long pale white whiskers, and hauntingly pale honey yellow eyes, the two have short muzzles and sloping foreheads and amazingly large bat-like ears. With large tufts on their foreheads with a bright orange color, the two are devilishly handsome with teasing smiles and ivory white teeth.
The two are clearly well-fed despite the fact they are of loner status. Their coats have a silky, healthy sheen to it, rather glossy to the touch. Not a single blemish can be seen, and the two can be rather vain when it comes down to it. Not a single blade of grass will be found or clumps of dirt on their pelts and they take pride in that. If you look at the other cats that slink around their home, then it's something to be proud of.
History: The two were not born as kittypets or clan cats. But as true loners. But Crash and Burn weren't always a duo, but a trio. They were triplets. They were Branch, Leaf and Sky, Sky being the youngest of the trio, a young beautiful she-cat. At a young age, they were abandoned by their parents in a cardboard box, and the three set out in surviving. The three would hunt for one another and hissed at any cat that came near one another. Until the three came across an elderly cat. Branch and Leaf were hesitant to help him but with some convincing from Sky, the three sat down and watched the old man gobble at their catch with relish. He then treated the triplets with stories. Stories of a wild quartet of cats, that survived on a base of rules with leaders that couldn't die and commanded leagues of warriors and healers. The two doubted the talk and dismissed it, but Sky was intrigued. And she managed to convince her brothers once more to investigate.
Although it didn't take much, the two older brothers loved Sky with all their hearts All three were astonished when they managed to come across the cats at one of their famous gatherings. All three were exactly ten moons old. Sky wanted to join immediately, loving the idea of a home, a place to stay. Where they weren't threatened by evil cats who constantly tried to kill them. But the two said no, that they couldn't. They were alley cats, and these cats were huge, with enough warriors. Why would they take the triplets in? And what would happen if they were separated? Looking back, the three wished they said yes. Then maybe this wouldn't happen.
But they said no, and the three disappeared to their alley where they were greeted by numerous cats who wished to take their alley by force. They fought desperately to keep the home they had since they were born. But no luck. The two brothers each had deep bite marks in their necks and when they awoke they were left with the unpleasant sight of their dead sister, her eyes glazed over. The two twins stood vigil for three days and three nights, only awakening from their trance when the old cat they had helped earlier brought them a mouse each. And it was then, their lust for the vengeance of their sister started.
The brothers departed and entered the gang of two separate large alley-cat groups, having the meager group of little alley cats that had killed their sister grown. The two spread lies and rumors until the two gangs met up and attacked one another, as the two cats watched from the balcony with such cold, icy glares. When the battle was finished, Branch and Leaf jumped down and slain any cat that had survived, hunting down the cowards until the alleys were filled with blood. Those who hadn't been involved started to call them the Crash and Burn twins, and they ruled the shadows with anger and hate. Finally, the old cat visited them once more and ordered for the two to leave, to leave the alleys and to join the forest cats. he said that staying here wasn't healthy. So they reluctantly agreed. But they still wait in the shadows, waiting for a chance to turn their backs on the forest clans. They suspect the four groups are the same as the alley gangs, that they will kill cats to get the things they want.
Other notes: stupid opera browser didn't save my finished biography so i had to rewrite it. so please excuse the planet of the apes/charlton heston reference.
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birdcat
Clan Leader
BoneClan Leader
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Post by birdcat on May 6, 2011 6:16:18 GMT -5
Thought I'd give Bracken a hand, hope you don't mind ^^;
Yay for the first loners xD
Now they are very interesting, but there are a few typos and missing words.
First thing first, you use "people" a lot when I think you should use "cats".
Now in personality: "They are what you call a neutral party, the play for all and no pack, any and every person." It might just be me, but the bold text is kinda confusing.
"Despite the fact, they with personalities and emotions, they are always out-going and flirtatious, egos big enough to smother anyone who's near." I think you are missing a word.
Now in History: "Although it didn't take much, the two older brother loved Sky with all their heart." And 's' should be after "brother"
Fix those and I think you're good ^^
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acez
Medicine Cat
GustClan Medicine Cat
i'd like to blame global warming
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Post by acez on May 6, 2011 20:19:39 GMT -5
oooh testing out your new authority right? lol, thanks. I fixed everything~
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birdcat
Clan Leader
BoneClan Leader
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Post by birdcat on May 7, 2011 6:58:03 GMT -5
Lol, yep yep xD Hmm... Everything looks fine to me ^^ ACCEPTED EDIT;; Hmm, it turns out I can't move or lock this thread T-T But you are accepted so you can start rping them, we just have to wait till Bracken gets back to move it :/
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Post by Brackentail on May 9, 2011 16:04:38 GMT -5
Hm, Clan Leaders still can't move threads? Strange, I thought I fixed that. Ah well, I'll make sure of it once I get home tomorrow. Thanks, Birdy! Moving to Accepted Biographies.
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